I can see green leaved trees in the distance and other rhinos next to me. I feel the rhinos rough leather in between my legs. I can hear the rhinos feet stomp on to the ground as it is charging forwards. I can smell the dust from the rhinos skin and I can taste the dust that the rhino is kicking up from the ground. Luke
Zoe Rhinos are stomping through the desert flinging sand behind them. The rhinos are passing trees step by step. A boy aboard one of the three rhinos happy as can be.
Hello Zoe, I really like your descriptive words and it really makes me feel like I am in that scenario and you punctuation is really good as well. Luke
Neena, I hear the rhinos thumping against the sandy ground. I see the fluffy clouds slowly racing across the sky. I see the bright sun shining down on my boiling skin.
Big Rhinos loudy stumping on the thick sand. There ruff thick skin wiggling when they run. The boy shouting and jumping as if he was a cowboy but riding a Rhino.
I See The Sizzling Sand, The Misty/Haze Of The White Clouds. I Hear Foot Steps Of Rhinos. I Smell? I Touch The Thick Bubbly Ripple Skin. I Taste My Dry Mouth, The Dry Sand.
Isabella. When I see This photo The first things I see are Three Humongous Rhinos And Then I look at the Background And see trees And Misty clouds.I feel The rhinos Boney Back And Then suddenly I feel the scorching sun hit my Back And also feel The hot dust as it hits me as I hear the rhinos feet stomping and the rhinos calling each other.Then I start to smell the Dirt and sand And start to smell the sand.
Felix, I would see the brown dusty sand fly behind me and the trees blowing in the cold wind. I would feel the rhinos rough skin and pointy spine I would also feel happy,free and safe. I would hear rhinos heavy feet thumping on the soft sand and the trees blowing in the nice cold wind. I would smell the rhinos hot sweat as I ride through the hot Savannah.
Hi Nicole, Charli here, in the photo I can see the dusty foggy misty air my feet are on fire and im flaming up I cant even open my eyes because of the scorching sun. As I gallop past some trees I start to here thumping and stamping as I look behind a big wift of air went in to my nose it smells like rhino poo. As we bolt into the sunset I taste dirt fly into my mouth blog ya late
I can see the rhino flicking up dust/sand and the bright sun and some dark and light green trees, I can feel the hot burning sun on my skin and the rhinos rough skin, I can hear the rhinos stomping on the sand, I can smell dirt on the rhinos and lastly I can taste the dust that the rhinos are making. By Tiffany
I see three strong rhinos running through the glazing sun on the hot yellow sand. I can taste hot air and dust as hot as a freezer is cold. I feel thick big rhino skin on my body rubbery as a car tyre.
Felix, I would see the brown dusty sand fly behind me and the trees blowing in the cold wind. I would feel the rhinos rough skin and pointy spine I would also feel happy,free and safe. I would hear rhinos heavy feet thumping on the soft sand and the trees blowing in the nice cold wind. I would smell the rhinos hot sweat as I ride through the hot Savannah.
Bitner I see the 3 grey enormous rhinos thumping towards me like 3 monster trucks. I feel the soft sand under my feet as the rhinos whip past me like the wind.I can hear the 3 rhinos feet thumping together like 3 loud drums playing in a band and the kid screaming like a baby. I can smell the rhinos skin,the skin smells like poo and their breath smells like rotten egg in a salad.All I taste is the plain sand that the rhinos are whipping in my face.
I feel the dust soaring into my eyes,I fell the hot sun glazing on me.I hear the thumps of the rhinos,I hear the gallops of rhinos.I see the giant rhinos,I see the curving sand.I smell rhinos mud and dirt,I smell fresh air
Hazel: That looks like fun .Rhinos with big horns are among us it also looks uncomfortable and like a bumpy ride I can picture crickets in the background.
I can see dry trees in the distance and the scorching hot sun.I feel the Rhinos thick skin and the sweat on my body.I can hear the Rhinos thumping with their loud feet. I can smell the dirt on the Rhinos and the dust. I can taste the dusty sand on my tounge. Jadarose
Nicolas I see 3 big black rhino's charging in the African Savanna. I feel the hot air and huge clouds of dust as the rhino's pass. I hear rhino's galloping across the Savanna.
Arden, I see a kid riding a bony rhino sprinting across the scorching hot desert. I feel the dry dusty sand burning my feet making me beg for shade or rain. I hear the thumping of the rhinos galloping across the Savannah Desert.
I can see green leaved trees in the distance and other rhinos next to me. I feel the rhinos rough leather in between my legs. I can hear the rhinos feet stomp on to the ground as it is charging forwards. I can smell the dust from the rhinos skin and I can taste the dust that the rhino is kicking up from the ground. Luke
ReplyDeleteI like how you added all the seances and said what is in the background
Deleteand added lots of adjectives.
Zoe
Zoe
ReplyDeleteRhinos are stomping through the desert flinging sand behind them.
The rhinos are passing trees step by step.
A boy aboard one of the three rhinos happy as can be.
Hello Zoe, I really like your descriptive words and it really makes me feel like I am in that scenario and you punctuation is really good as well. Luke
DeleteNeena,
ReplyDeleteI hear the rhinos thumping against the sandy ground.
I see the fluffy clouds slowly racing across the sky.
I see the bright sun shining down on my boiling skin.
Great adjectives Neena! I wish I used the last one.
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Big Rhinos loudy stumping on the thick sand. There ruff thick skin wiggling when they run.
ReplyDeleteThe boy shouting and jumping as if he was a cowboy but riding a Rhino.
Sulaiman
Ileana
ReplyDeleteI see enormous rhinos with deep black eyes and they look as if their searching for water.
i hear loud frightening thumps as the boy cheers and laughs.
i feel rough lumps in the rhinos scaly thick skin as he strolls through the hot sparkling sand
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I feel the boiling hot sun on my flesh
ReplyDeleteI See The Sizzling Sand, The Misty/Haze Of The White Clouds.
ReplyDeleteI Hear Foot Steps Of Rhinos.
I Smell?
I Touch The Thick Bubbly Ripple Skin.
I Taste My Dry Mouth, The Dry Sand.
Isabella.
ReplyDeleteWhen I see This photo The first things I see are Three Humongous Rhinos And Then I look at the Background And see trees And Misty clouds.I feel The rhinos Boney Back And Then suddenly I feel the scorching sun hit my Back And also feel The hot dust as it hits me as I hear the rhinos feet stomping and the rhinos calling each other.Then I start to smell the Dirt and sand And start to smell the sand.
Felix, I would see the brown dusty sand fly behind me and the trees blowing in the cold wind. I would feel the rhinos rough skin and pointy spine I would also feel happy,free and safe. I would hear rhinos heavy feet thumping on the soft sand and the trees blowing in the nice cold wind. I would smell the rhinos hot sweat as I ride through the hot Savannah.
ReplyDeleteHi Nicole, Charli here,
ReplyDeletein the photo I can see the dusty foggy misty air my feet are on fire and im flaming up I cant even open my eyes because of the scorching sun. As I gallop past some trees I start to here thumping and stamping as I look behind a big wift of air went in to my nose it smells like rhino poo. As we bolt into the sunset I taste dirt fly into my mouth
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I can see the rhino flicking up dust/sand and the bright sun and some dark and light green trees, I can feel the hot burning sun on my skin and the rhinos rough skin, I can hear the rhinos stomping on the sand, I can smell dirt on the rhinos and lastly I can taste the dust that the rhinos are making.
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Oshani
ReplyDeletel see sand behind me. It was scary.
l feel the hot air. It was dusty.
l was so happy it was life changing.
I see three strong rhinos running through the glazing sun on the hot yellow sand.
ReplyDeleteI can taste hot air and dust as hot as a freezer is cold.
I feel thick big rhino skin on my body rubbery as a car tyre.
Felix, I would see the brown dusty sand fly behind me and the trees blowing in the cold wind. I would feel the rhinos rough skin and pointy spine I would also feel happy,free and safe. I would hear rhinos heavy feet thumping on the soft sand and the trees blowing in the nice cold wind. I would smell the rhinos hot sweat as I ride through the hot Savannah.
ReplyDeletei see a little boy, big 3 rihnos,bright sun,
ReplyDeletei feel. sun going in my eyes,soft dirtty sand
i hear foot stoping on
i tast sand going in my mouth
Bitner
ReplyDeleteI see the 3 grey enormous rhinos thumping towards me like 3 monster trucks. I feel the soft sand
under my feet as the rhinos whip past me like the wind.I can hear the 3 rhinos feet thumping together like 3 loud drums playing in a band and the kid screaming like a baby. I can smell the rhinos skin,the skin smells like poo and their breath smells like rotten egg in a salad.All I taste is the plain sand that the rhinos are whipping in my face.
I feel the dust soaring into my eyes,I fell the hot sun glazing on me.I hear the thumps of the rhinos,I hear the gallops of rhinos.I see the giant rhinos,I see the curving sand.I smell rhinos
ReplyDeletemud and dirt,I smell fresh air
Hazel: That looks like fun .Rhinos with big horns are among us it also looks uncomfortable and like a bumpy ride I can picture crickets in the background.
ReplyDeleteAundreah
ReplyDeleteI see enormous rough tree swishing back and forth.
I hear Rhinos thumping
I can see dry trees in the distance and the scorching hot sun.I feel the Rhinos thick skin and the sweat on my body.I can hear the Rhinos thumping with their loud feet. I can smell the dirt on the Rhinos and the dust. I can taste the dusty sand on my tounge.
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Moala
ReplyDeleteI see the sand and trees. I feel wind and I hear the rhino stomping. I smell sand.
I see dust scorching on my in my mouth. I can feel the rhino bumping on my tummy. i see the burning sun .
ReplyDeleteNicolas
ReplyDeleteI see 3 big black rhino's charging in the African Savanna. I feel the hot air and huge clouds of dust as the rhino's pass. I hear rhino's galloping across the Savanna.
Arden,
ReplyDeleteI see a kid riding a bony rhino
sprinting across the scorching hot desert.
I feel the dry dusty sand burning my feet making me beg for shade or rain.
I hear the thumping of the rhinos galloping across the Savannah Desert.
Nice one Ardey ����
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