Friday, October 26, 2018

Can you write an introduction?

In Room 25 we are learning to write an introduction (orientation) for our narratives (stories).

resource image
Keywords to describe this picture:
- moody, unusual
- dark and gloomy day
- misty
- deathly, haunted
- foggy - misty. As the mist rolled in...
- middle of the lost island
- faded, abandoned
- mysterious
- lamp town
- deserted but only one shadow appears. Silhouette

Your task Room 25:

Write a comment below with your introduction.

Remember an orientation (introduction) includes:

  1. Where it takes place (setting)
  2. When (time of day)
  3. Who (Characters)
  4. What (Telling your readers what it is about)
Once upon a gloomy summer's night, a silhouette of a shadow stood by the lamp house, waiting....

25 comments:

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  3. Claire

    One dark and gloomy night, on the deserted Forgotten Island, a mysterious shadow glided over the misty, creaky, unstable bridge. The shadow stood in front of the small tree house swaying unsteadily in the wind.
    It took long strides towards the ladder and floated up it. At the top, the shadow lifted up a shadowy hand and knocked noisily on the wooden door.

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  4. (Matti)

    At mignight, in an dark and gloomy harbor there was a tree house. Somebody spyed on it. He waited for someone.

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  5. As the moon rises like a newborn deer, the fog fills my empty corpse, the lights flicker as if there is a problem. I walk across the creaking boardwalk, I notice a empty silhouette, I glance ahead and see the looming shadow of a hidden tree house as start to wounder, how will the meeting go.....

    -Frankie

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  6. Name: Isaac

    At midnight, somewhere in the middle of the ocean, an abandoned harbour greets it's visitors.
    Spirits stride across the water, ancient boats drive by themselves and instead of a hanger, a creaky, ancient tree sits in its spot.
    Everything seems normal, but in reality, this is the land of spirits.

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  7. Zac

    In a deadly abandoned swamp there the was a smelly ogre ghost that shouted what are you doing in my swamp and his house is by a bout guy that trades the end

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  8. Name:Murat
    Once upon a gloomy night, in the middle of an abandoned light house, was a spirit shadow. It came out of nowhere. It stood staying on the sand of the islands beach. You cant see it or hear it by itself you can only see the shadow of it.

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  9. Name: Devon

    as the light is Fading into the silhouettes the dark takes over the bright people go to sleep as less and less people stay awake finally there are only about 4 people awake they are on a harbour there are 2 boats left . as a mythical walking mail box tip toes out of the harbour

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  10. Mala.
    Imagine walking down this deathly and deserted path in the middle of Afghanistan rain forest.
    Each step you take fog sprays at you eyes leaving you with no sight or trace of who and what has been here.
    What would you think.
    I once walked down here.
    I still do.
    In fact there's me right there in the photo in the water.
    Surprise surprise, I'm a ghost and if or when you walk down this moody and dreadful walk way you will to.
    You will end up like every other one of us.
    A ghost, spirit or dead.
    Till then have a nice life.
    -Mala

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  11. Digby
    On a dark foggy night, not far above the deep dark wet ocean I stood in a white smelly letter box as I watched an old abandoned tree hut. Then I hear something smash and see a shadow flicker inside the dark abandoned tree hut...

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  12. the dusguysed bird trots up and down the splintering bords leading to the forgoton docs of the dirtlands the water shadows rise like drones as the sun falls like a cold fireball.
    the lighthouses lights flicker and then flash on.

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  13. Once upon a dark and gloomy night, a silhouette sticks to the water like glue next to the gloomy tree, the tree house seems to be hovering in the scrawny dead tree.

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  14. Jadarose

    Once upon a dark winters night, broken wood lead to a haunted lamp house that stood in the middle of a long river. There was lots of mist around the lamp house, and it was as dark as the night sky. There was a lost shadow in the stream, it moved from stream to stream and waits for his next victim.

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  15. Alyzae,

    One dark haunted misty winter's night, creeping around through the deep dark forest. I found a deathly, old, rusty looking witches house with bright yellow lanterns. Beaming at an old rusty boat it started moving until a shadow appeared...

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  16. Cleo

    Once upon a new moon, a fog rolled in over Shadow town, where shadows run free and leave no trace of their existence. A silhouette sits on the lamp that leaves an eerie glow to the night sky. As I watch them slink away I'm left speechless. We don't move that way or should I say they don't move that way.

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  17. Elio

    Once upon a full moon the gloom and mist stretched up to your chest and every corner is mysterious danger as you think your safe you never know what could happen next in the gloomy night sky you could step in a crack might just vanish you could trip over and fall into danger ...

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  18. Name:Marley
    On a dark gloomy night there is a shadow of the spirits. He stands, surrounded by the ocean, waiting for his family to come to him and he,s so lonely and cold and scared afraid of the dark.

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  19. Bronson

    One night there was a blooming dark lake. In the middle of the lake there was a haunted tree house that had a light shining for the top.

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  20. Sumaya

    Once upon a time, in an abandoned misty forest, a mysterious spirit shadow stands right by the deathly tree house. As the spirits shadow waits by the deathly tree house the rusty old boat starts to move...

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  21. Matthew
    Lurking in the shadows, a haunted silhouette sits still in the dark lamp house. The dark night runs ahead. The preternatural place appears to be abandoned. It feels as if hands are climbing onto your body, the shadow approaching you.His face is drooling against you as that happened fog rolls in, misty barely seeing anything like everything's fading away.

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  22. Once on a dark winters night, the wolfs howled at the moon a spy watched the tree house as the witch made an invisibility potion and drank it.

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  23. Matthew
    Lurking in the shadows, a haunted silhouette sits still in the dark lamp house. The dark night runs ahead. The preternatural place appears to be abandoned. It feels as if hands are climbing onto your body, the shadow approaching you.His face is drooling against you as that happened fog rolls in, misty barely seeing anything like everything's fading away.

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  24. Ebony

    The clock hit midnight, a haunted grey tree house where lived some spirits. No one had made it out alive. Near the tree house stood a haunted boat where legend has it some one die in there.

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  25. TeTane

    In a dark haunted mystery island inside a pitch black cave, it was foggy you could barely anything. A shadow appeared instantly. The old wooden person did not care about the shadow and then another wooden person was on a boat. The wooden person couldn't hear him but he was behind him.

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