The eagle flew above the ocean pulling a carriage aggressively. It glided through the dull night though it was dark so the eagle did not have good eye sight. It was foggy that night. It was heading for a castle in the distance. The eagle was going so fast it was blinding. There were rocks beneath the carriage. But the carriage made it to the castle safely. THE END By Antonio
Wow, Kaito. You have used some great wow words from our plan. I would like you to read your sentence again and see if you have repeated any words? Sometimes when we repeat words it can lose the impact of our writing. Have another go and see if you can make your sentence even better.
Speedily, A mysterious carriage glides though with a crane pulling the dark carriage across the gloomy night sky. Ominously, A Carriage is heading East towards A really sinister castle.
Thanks for sharing your writing Room 25. Very descriptive, in fact I had a little chill run down my back when I read Jiraiya, Kaito and Antonio's writing, it makes me imagine a very dark and mysterious kind of place.
Woooshhh! The strong current of wind violently blew towards the moonlight. The dim bogie zoomed through the gloomy clouds. The coach tried to get to the Haunted castle, But it couldn't because it was very foggy and dark. Thinking very hard, The blinded eagle drifted and did loop - the - loops swiftly. The bogie began to bob up and down like an angry bird. After a very long sky trip, The black,small couch reached the dark castle harmlessly.
Hi room 24 here are my sentences Dangerously, the carriage soars over the shimmering ocean. The sky filled with dark gloomy clouds that hover over the ocean. In the distance theirs a Mysterious immense castle surrounded in darkness. Blog you later Neena
Hi room 24 here are my sentences. In the dark gloomy sky a black eagle soared high in the air pulling a heavy carriage over the shimmering sea. It was so dark in the storm that the eagle was flying blindly. It was heading towards a tall spooky castle in the distance. The eagle was zooming through the air so fast that it looked like it wouldn't stop, but the carriage made it safely to the castle. Floyd
Cautiously, we ran as quick as we could but the carriage was speeding up. Suddenly it stopped and the strange bird opened its wings in front of us. Then the bird charged. We thought this would be it then suddenly the bird was quickly pushed out of the way.
Brightly, the luminous sun shines blindingly on the calm water. Ferociously, the enormous hawk flaps his way towards the mysterious castle. Ominous rocks lie around the mountain that holds a dark solitary castle.
The gloaming moon shines it bright light over the dark thunderous sea next to us. Then there was something huge monster flying right to our wooden carriage. It took us with its solid claws in a blink of an eye and was taking us right to death castle.
The speedily deadly bird of prey is flying with a carriage above the ocean. The gloomy shiny of rocks near to the mysterious castle makes it so magical.
The eagle flew above the ocean pulling a carriage aggressively. It glided through the dull night though it was dark so the eagle did not have good eye sight. It was foggy that night. It was heading for a castle in the distance. The eagle was going so fast it was blinding. There were rocks beneath the carriage. But the carriage made it to the castle safely. THE END By Antonio
ReplyDeleteHi Nicole this is my sentence:In the gloomy dark stormy sky and the moonlight ocean themysteriouse carriage hovered swifty in the gloomy dark sky.
ReplyDeleteWow, Kaito. You have used some great wow words from our plan. I would like you to read your sentence again and see if you have repeated any words? Sometimes when we repeat words it can lose the impact of our writing. Have another go and see if you can make your sentence even better.
DeleteIn the gloomy dark sky and the monn light ocean the mysteriouse carriage hovered swiftly to the horrifying castel. is that better Nicole
DeleteSpeedily, A mysterious carriage glides though with a crane pulling the dark carriage across the gloomy night sky. Ominously, A Carriage is heading East towards A really sinister castle.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your writing Room 25. Very descriptive, in fact I had a little chill run down my back when I read Jiraiya, Kaito and Antonio's writing, it makes me imagine a very dark and mysterious kind of place.
ReplyDeleteWhere actually room 24.
DeleteWoooshhh! The strong current of wind violently blew towards the moonlight. The dim bogie zoomed through the gloomy clouds. The coach tried to get to the Haunted castle, But it couldn't because it was very foggy and dark. Thinking very hard, The blinded eagle drifted and did loop - the - loops swiftly. The bogie began to bob up and down like an angry bird. After a very long sky trip, The black,small couch reached the dark castle harmlessly.
ReplyDeleteCautiously, the carriage drifted through the dull moonlight.
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Hi room 24 here are my sentences Dangerously, the carriage soars over the shimmering ocean. The sky filled with dark gloomy clouds that hover over the ocean. In the distance theirs a Mysterious immense castle surrounded in darkness.
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ReplyDeleteHi room 24 here are my sentences. In the dark gloomy sky a black eagle soared high in the air pulling a heavy carriage over the shimmering sea. It was so dark in the storm that the eagle was flying blindly. It was heading towards a tall spooky castle in the distance. The eagle was zooming through the air so fast that it looked like it wouldn't stop, but the carriage made it safely to the castle.
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Cautiously, we ran as quick as we could but the carriage was speeding up. Suddenly it stopped and the strange bird opened its wings in front of us. Then the bird charged. We thought this would be it then suddenly the bird was quickly pushed out of the way.
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Hello Everyone! Here are my 3 sentences.
ReplyDeleteBrightly, the luminous sun shines blindingly on the calm water.
Ferociously, the enormous hawk flaps his way towards the mysterious castle.
Ominous rocks lie around the mountain that holds a dark solitary castle.
The gloaming moon shines it bright light over the dark thunderous sea next to us.
ReplyDeleteThen there was something huge monster flying right to our wooden carriage.
It took us with its solid claws in a blink of an eye and was taking us right to death castle.
Hello room 24! Here are my two sentences :
ReplyDeleteThe speedily deadly bird of prey is flying with a carriage above the ocean.
The gloomy shiny of rocks near to the mysterious castle makes it so magical.
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